tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post1862072482395131684..comments2023-08-28T18:09:27.051+05:30Comments on After Office Thoughts Flow like I don' know what. - Hindi Kavitayen: देशद्रोहीlifes' like this.. never fair never righthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07271533083473280752noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-59052124960638523712011-04-14T00:24:37.760+05:302011-04-14T00:24:37.760+05:30good one......good one......Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07765854783263432682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-7513146567439490972011-04-08T20:40:23.371+05:302011-04-08T20:40:23.371+05:30Great vocab Bhaiya ...pretty relevant in today'...Great vocab Bhaiya ...pretty relevant in today's timesWritefully Yourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838026985016254900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-36924663406842502182011-04-08T20:39:28.588+05:302011-04-08T20:39:28.588+05:30Great work Bhaiya...pretty relevant in today's...Great work Bhaiya...pretty relevant in today's timesWritefully Yourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838026985016254900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-8603954824702707392011-04-07T15:49:44.819+05:302011-04-07T15:49:44.819+05:30द्विवेदी जी
धन्यवाद्.. आपकी सलाह मैं ध्यान में रख...द्विवेदी जी <br />धन्यवाद्.. आपकी सलाह मैं ध्यान में रखूँगा.. भाषा के सुधार और शब्दों के चयन पर ध्यान देने के लिए अगर कोई तरीका हो जो मैं अपना सकूँ तो जरुर बताएं .. क्यूँ की मैं बहुत समय से मैं हिंदी साहित्य से दूर रहा हूँ शायद काम की वजह से तो भाषा पर पकड़ कम हुई है .. काफी मौकों पर ऐसा लगता है की मैं अपने विचारों के लिए शब्द नहीं खोज पा रहा हूँ .. <br />मेरी और भी कृतियाँ देखिये और टिपण्णी कीजिये ..lifes' like this.. never fair never righthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07271533083473280752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-55400738750696288962011-04-07T15:25:44.639+05:302011-04-07T15:25:44.639+05:30ऋषिकान्त जी बड़ी मुस्किल में आपका नाम ढूंढ पाया मै...ऋषिकान्त जी बड़ी मुस्किल में आपका नाम ढूंढ पाया मैं...आखिर इंजीनियर जो ठहरे ....<br />आपके भाव बहुत गहरे हैं <br />बस शिल्प को थोड़ा और तराशने कि जरूरत है भाषा और शब्दों के चयन पर थोड़ा सा और ध्यान दीजिये ...बिना मांगे सलाह देने के लिए माफ़ी चाहता हूँ.आनंदhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06563691497895539693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-20304415271863053142011-04-06T22:06:29.016+05:302011-04-06T22:06:29.016+05:30Simply loved it...!!Simply loved it...!!Udayan Srivastavahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02115024395811307447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-18577590257814679672011-04-05T23:47:02.102+05:302011-04-05T23:47:02.102+05:30Wah wah !!Wah wah !!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09350363723700117369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-84210583324361194462011-04-05T23:06:56.578+05:302011-04-05T23:06:56.578+05:30O Man...!!! I really liked this one....I never kne...O Man...!!! I really liked this one....I never knew this Rishi inside you....Gr8 to discover it...!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982331952787850125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-55587596368469732552011-04-05T21:16:02.864+05:302011-04-05T21:16:02.864+05:30very well written. I liked the way the tone and th...very well written. I liked the way the tone and the anger is expressed in the poem. :-)Rjhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14241634323197124021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-69486679812101127432011-04-05T20:03:40.715+05:302011-04-05T20:03:40.715+05:30too good :)too good :)Dinkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01404542186759163650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-49500796923791045892011-04-05T19:57:05.739+05:302011-04-05T19:57:05.739+05:30Thank You Kshama Ji, Thanks Utki :)Thank You Kshama Ji, Thanks Utki :)lifes' like this.. never fair never righthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07271533083473280752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-52328985082838448802011-04-05T17:33:50.191+05:302011-04-05T17:33:50.191+05:30bhaiya this is one of ur best creations.... becaus...bhaiya this is one of ur best creations.... because the words are very familiar and simple .... anyone can understand the theme.... in one of ur older poem i had to read a para 2 times... :P:P<br />but this is just too good to read and might be too good to hear :)<br />keep it up.. :))Kumar Utkarshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12507676821006602332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-56172418324538971472011-04-05T17:11:23.219+05:302011-04-05T17:11:23.219+05:30Gazab ke alfaaz!Gazab ke alfaaz!kshamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14115656986166219821noreply@blogger.com