tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post1842716067938940477..comments2023-08-28T18:09:27.051+05:30Comments on After Office Thoughts Flow like I don' know what. - Hindi Kavitayen: बलिदानlifes' like this.. never fair never righthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07271533083473280752noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-40976245066311758672010-01-13T14:04:23.253+05:302010-01-13T14:04:23.253+05:30you are simply the best dear.i wanna give u 110 ou...you are simply the best dear.i wanna give u 110 out of 100.after a long time u wrote a very good poem.keep going......Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12162036253183678572noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-63895650448104398072009-10-31T13:42:03.963+05:302009-10-31T13:42:03.963+05:30Simply Awesome... i dunt have wrds to appreciate t...Simply Awesome... i dunt have wrds to appreciate this effort ... God Job Dost ... I loved it...The things tht i liked most in this are :<br />1) Tone of the Poem<br />2) hindi dictionary is unbeatable(shabdon ka chayan atti uttam hai)<br />3) geeta ka part jis terah se use kiya gya hai..uska jawab hi nahi...<br />4) Excellent beginning with fantastic ending..<br /> <br />After reading this, i have only line to say..wat a fantastic Work this time!!! n i felt Privileged to be first/second listener of this effort. <br /><br />keep writing :-)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00213071889089441097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-32793594387972851332009-10-29T12:02:44.164+05:302009-10-29T12:02:44.164+05:30bhai bhai bhai...kya bhasha likhi hai...ati uttam....bhai bhai bhai...kya bhasha likhi hai...ati uttam...aisa laga koi granth padh raha hun...aur jo sandesh dia woh sach hai...zindagi bahut kuch mangati hai humse...bas agar hum tayyar hai balidan k liye...to duniya jeet lenge...bas ek baat pata honi chaiye...kisi ko mukkammal jaha nai milta...kisi ko zameen...kisi ko asmaan nai milta..!Writefully Yourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838026985016254900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-55593586546962507952009-10-29T11:44:11.752+05:302009-10-29T11:44:11.752+05:30awesome !!awesome !!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04164443496756964964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6120810747676840938.post-33422794661847314092009-10-29T11:43:29.955+05:302009-10-29T11:43:29.955+05:30Jeevan ko sahee pahchana..har pal ek dharam yuddh ...Jeevan ko sahee pahchana..har pal ek dharam yuddh hai...har duvidha ek dharam sankat..isse nijat mile to kaise?kshamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14115656986166219821noreply@blogger.com